lace is a shame, the first half of the piece was bland and the second half fell flat. The climax part was good though, but I feel like they added too much! It felt excessive. As for the third place.....Yan retracted her hand. "It's almost time to get off work in an hour, go back.""Hey Hey."He came to a sudden stop, turning back to look at him."I said what I meant on the Ferris wheel today."He really...